Anyone remember this episode?
RARE Failing Upward Promo 9/15/1999
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@WaeBakStudios That's what reviews are for. Maybe you'll give your work a look & question how you can make it more interesting scene by scene. Talking while walking, talking while doing pretty much anything that isn't sitting still. Vary up the angles and stuff. Work on the fluidness of the dialog. Allow improv. etc :u Best of luck.
It's a fair assessment and I don't blame you for feeling that way, I get that dialog driven shorts with little action might not be everyone's thing. Feel free to check out the next episode, it's been on Youtube for a bit. If it's not your taste, I totally get it, it's cool that you gave it a shot.
cacodayum
Since I can't reply on the review itself:
I am a big fan of Daria & Downtown, the problem is, they had a way of keeping things visually interesting, full of movement and things happening, or varied camera angles & locations. I understand this is only an initial pilot sort of deal, but boy there was a lot of them talking without hardly anything else happening. Again, hoping future parts will be more varied & active.
WaeBakStudios
We're trying to change things up a bit, but I personally don't think you're gonna dig the next few, man. I appreciate the honest feedback regardless.